That’s right…our first ever REDUX comic. I was so disatisfied with yesterday’s strip I decided to have another go at it. It’s still not as successful as it is in my head (where I am a BRILLIANT artist) but it’s much better than the first pass. I still didn’t spend a lot of time (I don’t HAVE a lot of time) but I gave myself a more realistic amount of time…and the results are better. I hope you all agree. 
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it is better. i did like your drawing of you a little better in the first one but this one works better than the other. good job.
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I like the last panel.
Are you topless in this one? Wroaw!
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I like both. This one certainly conveys the SPLAT much more clearly, but why not add some blood dribbling from her mouth? Let’s go all out.
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Adam: I thought I drew myself about the same in them both…strange. Thanks
jamminjabber: Thanks. And Adam thought I was naked the first time I did this strip as well…I’m not…but I guess I need to start drawing clothing wrinkles or something…
TK42ONE: Thanks. I wanted to add some gruesome-ness, but the panel was getting pretty crowded as is…
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