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#27.  Follies.  Ann Beattie.  Short Fiction Collection.  3.5 stars

i’m not quite sure what to say about this book, i enjoyed it, but it ultimately left me wanting.  i think her stories were beautiful, and unlike many collections i read, they were all very even in that none stood out more than others as better or worse (which i think i like, although i seem to also be complaining about it, so who the hell knows what i like).  there was a certain level of quality to all of the pieces and it was nice to know walking into a new story that it was going to deliver as the others had. 

i also enjoyed the realism in her stories.  i completely believed her characters, i suppose in part that is because she writes somewhat melancholy and bittersweet stories that move slowly and deliberately, as life tends to.  her characters make the choices her characters would make, they never step out of line and do the unexpected, and while that may sound boring, i think grabbing on and translating that kind of realism is actually quite difficult, especially in short fiction where you have a short amount of time to nail those things down.  unfortunately, because of her realisitc sparse way of writing and the somewhat non-dramatic real life circumstances her characters find themselves in i didn’t find myself too attached to any of the characters. but her writing was beautiful, and i enjoyed it consistently throughout and the stories flowed flawlessly into one another, though there is no obvious link.

i guess my biggest problem with the book overall is that the endings didn’t do it for me.  i do so love it when my short fiction (or poetry…maybe even novels) have a snap to them.  not a twist ending or anything out of nowhere, but the idea that they kind of come around to something.  some kind of resolution or something…anything.  it’s funny because my mother loves her entertainment (movies, books, television shows) to be very tied up in a neat little bow, whether sad or happy, she likes to at least KNOW.  i have always complained to her that this is not an interesting way to look at things and that often the answers are given, just less obviously, and that you just have to look.  so it is ironic that i am now crying out for more closure.  strange.  perhaps i got lazy during her book and didn’t pay enough attention, or am just not smart enough to get it in the first place, but none of the stories had a ‘snap’…that thing i love that in the last few pages makes reading a story all the more fulfilling. 

still good though.  i’ll have to read more of Beattie’s work, she’s been quite prolific and except for a few stories in collections here and there this is the first of her work that i’ve read.

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ps – LOVE the cover.  so cute, and relevant to what is within…

#26. The Subway Chronicles. Edited by Jacquelin Cangro. Essay Collection. 3.0 stars

i picked this collection up mostly as an acknowledgment of how much i owe to New York City in its effort to help me become a better writer. i doubt New York City cares (or tried) to make me (and probably many others) become a better writer, but it happens nonetheless.* the inspiration and incident factor alone can make you a better writer without even trying. i often fear if i return to Los Angeles (or anywhere else for that matter) that i will suddenly have nothing to write about. that my actual experiences (overheard, seen, or otherwise) will plummet and i will have literally nothing but my imagination to guide me (never good).

this was a decent collection, solid and enjoyable. some really nice pieces and very few “losers” in the bunch. but there was nothing that really blew me away. i didn’t really come away from it with anything more than a pleasant feeling of having enjoyed myself and being ready to move on. i guess i generally want and expect more from my essays and short fiction than that, which is why it doesn’t rate a higher score. if you’re a new yorker born and raised, you can probably add at least half a star to my rating.

*it is still up for debate whether i have actually become a better writer since living here, and basically i have no actual proof of such a statement. requests for proof of any improvement will be casually ignored.

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oh yeah, and this marks the halfway point of my goal of 52 books and 52 reviews this year.  yippee!  i figure i’m about 8 books behind.  yeesh.

this is starting to look like a bad idea. 

i know i have to track my rejections regardless, but seeing my percentage of acceptance go from a happy 50% to a sad and quickly falling 25% within a week is a bit depressing. and posting the depressing news for mass (or mini-mass) consumption is equally frustrating.  but i’m going to stick to it (i think).

so officially, i got a rejection today from The Paris Review (a tough nut to crack).  the piece was I Wanna Be A Flower.  i thought it might be a bit freshman for them, i’ll try sending them something more seasoned later this year.  in the meantime i need to revise both Flower and Adele and see if i can find other homes for them. 

official count:  1 for 4.

i’ve decided to track my short fiction rejections (and acceptances – should i be so lucky).  i just got a rejection today 🙁  so i guess it’s time to start tracking.

i had previously submitted two pieces total in my life.  last year i submitted two and got one rejection (from Swink) and one acceptance, from Pearl.  my piece “I Hate The French” will be published in Pearl #38 (winter 2008).

this year i submitted 4 more and i just got my rejection today for The Threepenny Review. the piece is titled, “Adele, The Unremarkable”.  it is a bit of a departure piece for me, so it is disappointing (rejections always are i suppose) but i still have several pieces (3?) out there, so i can’t be too sad yet. besides, my novel is out there in the world as well, and i’m sending all my energy to that one right now, no energy left to worry about the poor short fiction bits…

so here’s the official rejection count:  1 for 3

here’s a link to Pearl Magazine:  http://pearlmag.com/

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i’m trying to offset superficial and/or negative posts i make with positive “deep” posts.  so here is my world healing post to offset yesterday’s negative one.  expect something nice and superficial and hopefully fun tomorrow (not to imply that today’s post is not fun).

my amazing friend keegan is involved with an incredible community project in minneapolis called Juxtaposition Arts.  here is a link, if you’re in the area (or even if you’re not) it never hurts to get involved.

http://www.juxtaposition.org/programs/programarchive.html

also, i have been dying to get involved in this program run by McSweeney’s, but am too busy being selfish with my time and trying to get my faltering “real career” on track.  if you’re less selfish (or more available than i am) you should check this out, they always need volunteers:

http://www.826national.org/

Mcsweeney’s has chapters in new york, los angeles, chicago, seattle, michigan, boston, and valencia (san francisco), so perhaps there is one near you.

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